To decide only one place around the world to visit is not an easy task. There are many beautiful countries, cities and landscapes throughout the globe to choose for visiting, for example: Argentina, Europe, the Caucasus, Chile, etc. Traveling is not only go to a place for staring a specific monument, otherwise it is go deep into its culture, meet its people, taste its plates, etc.
A place I would realy like to visit is Mongolia. Mongolia is a big country in the middle of Asia, it is bounded by Rusia and China among others. The capital of Mongolia is ulaan baatoor a place that that I haven't heard so much, the most interesting places are outside the capital though.
As a result of a strong and brave culture, mongolia currently is like to be in the medieval ages, specialy in its desert. such desert is named Gobi and it is populated by nomads. The nomads are descended from an old tribe of warriors and its most important national hero is Gengis Kan.
Gengis Kan was the man who founded the Mongol empire that conquered big part of the known world in those years (from Asia up to west Europe).
Gengis Kan was the man who gives the features to Mongolia, so finally I have to warn you beloved readers, that it wouldn't be strange if you bump into a throat singer or a mongolian wearing its traditional clothing
Nico, Congratulations, you have improved quite a lot, boy! Boy?...
ReplyDeleteGoing straight to the point now, I have some suggestions:
Say, "traveling is not only TO go to a place for staring AT a specific monument".
Also say, "the nomads are descendant of..."
Cities should also go with Capital Letter.
Last but not least, "Ulaan Batoor is a city I haven´t heard much FROM" and "Gengis Kan was the man responsible for the features of Mongolia"
You get a 90%.
See you.
Paula